Sihpromatum: I Grew My Boobs In China by Savannah Grace

  If you have been looking for a travel memoir that will make you laugh, make you cry, make you think–this is the book for you.

 

Here is the description from Goodreads:
SIHPROMATUM (Sip-row-may-tum) is a memoir series of one family’s four-year backpacking adventure around the world. The first installment, I Grew my Boobs in China, is the beginning of an intensely fascinating, sobering, and emotional memoir of Savannah’s introspective and innovative family adventure.

In 2005, 14-year-old Savannah Grace’s world is shattered when her mother unexpectedly announces that she and her family (mother, 45; brother, 25; sister, 17) would soon embark on an incredible, open-ended journey. When everything from her pets to the house she lived in is either sold, given away or put in storage, this naïve teenage girl runs headlong into the reality and hardships of a life on the road.
Built around a startling backdrop of over eighty countries (I Grew my Boobs in China relates the family’s adventures in China and Mongolia), this is a tale of feminine maturation – of Savannah’s metamorphosis from ingénue to woman-of-the-world. Nibbling roasted duck tongues in China and being stranded in Mongolia’s Gobi Desert are just two experiences that contribute to Savannah’s exploration of new cultures and to the process of adapting to the world around her.

ebook
Published August 19th 2012 by Sihpromatum Publishing House (first published August 16th 2012)
ISBN13
9780988123113
edition language
English
Here are my thoughts:
I dare you to read this book and not fall in love with it. Seriously, I dare you to. If you have been looking for a memoir that will make you smile, make you laugh and help you to look at the world through different eyes, this is surely the one to do it.

The first portion of this memoir tells the story of the average teenage girl. She is somewhat insecure, has had plenty of experience being the new kid in town and is trying to settle into a rhythm in her young life. She loves her dog, her best friend and her family. A phone call changes all of her plans, when her mother decides they are going to travel through China and live out of a backpack for a full year.

I could feel the devastation that young Savannah felt through her writing. She is very talented at expressing her memories and emotions through words and truly makes the reader feel as though they are right along beside her for the duration of the journey. What a journey it turns out to be–so many ways to experience all of your senses in this book!

It was amazing to read about this girl and her family and how much she grew up and changed over the course of their adventures. The descriptive language she uses to tell of her surroundings and each new place they visit made this somewhat like watching a movie. You could smell the air and see the colours through her words.

This is more than just a simple travel memoir. This is a story of spiritual and mental growth, physical change and family. Be careful when you read this, you might just want to sell everything you own and buy a sturdy backpack for your own adventure.

One of the main things I enjoyed about this book was the humor. There is a thread of hilarity that spans the course of the story, and the author never loses the ability to make her reader feel warm inside even during the portions that are more serious.

This is an excellent book from a talented author, and I recommend checking it out. You won’t be sorry you did.

On one final note–what a great title for a book!

The Tattered Banner By Duncan Hamilton

The Tattered Banner coverI am pleased to feature “The Tattered Banner” on my blog today. I just finished reading this book the other day and couldn’t wait to share it with you guys.

 

Duncan Hamilton is a very talented author and also a fellow wordpress blogger.

You can find his site here:

 

 
Here is the description from Goodreads:
 
Unique talent always attracts attention…

In a world where magic is outlawed, ability with a sword is prized above all else. For Soren this means the chance to live out his dreams.

Plucked from a life of privation, he is given a coveted place at Ostenheim’s Academy of Swordsmanship, an opportunity beyond belief.

Opportunity is not always what it seems however, and gifts rarely come without conditions. Soren becomes an unwitting pawn in a game of intrigue and treachery that could cost him not just his dreams, but also his life.

 
 372 pages
Published March 2nd 2013
ISBN
148101322X (ISBN13: 9781481013222)
edition language
English
 
 
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My thoughts on this novel:
 
The Tattered Banner by Duncan Hamilton is a different sort of fantasy novel and one that the reader can grow with. The events in this book span a lengthy period in the main character’s life and therefore the plot reveals itself in bits and pieces and there is a good amount of rise and fall in the story. The reader never has a chance to get bored as the pace is quick and the story is thoughtful.

Reading through this novel, there are moments when you know what is coming for a long time, but it isn’t exactly predictable. It actually feels rewarding when the character finally realises the same thing that you have known as the reader for a long time. There were a lot of other places in this book where the author went a completely different direction than I expected, and for the most part I think it worked.

I was impressed that Mr. Hamilton did not waste pages and pages of space describing the school his character was sent to. This has been seen and done in other novels of recent memory and I felt avoiding that aspect made this book much more original.

The descriptions in this novel are handled well. There is not so much description that the actions and events become lost in it, but there is enough to paint a visual picture of the world.

The story itself is well written and highlights the author’s style of writing. I enjoyed the third person perspective as it gave the reader an opportunity to get to know all of the characters rather than just the main.

Overall, this was an enjoyable read that fantasy lovers and those who enjoy reading adventures will most likely want to read again. If you haven’t read this book yet, pick up a copy and explore this world for yourself. I recommend it.

Someone left a little review

Dear Charles,

This is dedicated to you from the other bloggers and I, even if they don’t know it. We wuv you. Do we tell you often enough? Because we do. You are always the bright spot in this daily existence, so please accept the following as my, our, my, whatever–token of appreciation–all of us (and me)

 

Earlier today there was a new review on Charles’ book, Legends of Windemere: Beginning of a Hero. Now knowing that Charles is the professional that he is, he will not post this and bitch about it, so I will do it for him. He has morals, me? Not so much.

The reviewer basically said that he read the first few scenes and said it was all ‘show and not tell’.  Basically, he read the equivalent of the free sample and decided to review the book.

Here is a quote from Charles, and yes I got his permission first.

“He rated me lower that a pack of 500 Bicycle Ball Bearings, Bike Pedals, and Pepperoncini Peppers.  I’m tearing up laughing at that one.  To this reviewer, my book is worse than the mildest hot pepper and spare bike parts.”    Top Ramen, Charles, Top Ramen.

 

So here goes: (voice check memememememe. honey lemon tea. memememememe.)

 

Someone left a little review

on Amazon today

and when I see a new review

I jump up screaming YAY!

 

But on this one occassion

this reviewer went too far

he compared my stuff to  peppers

and forgot three of my stars

 

It isn’t that I’m picky

come on say a word or two

I welcome your opinion

and all your comments too

 

All I’m really asking

is that you reserve judgment until

you’ve gotten past the title

before using your reviewing skills

 

So don’t go  judging something

that you know nothing about

and cause all those who haven’t read

to suddenly have doubts

 

If you must compare my stuff

to some other person or thing

you could at least pick nouns worth while

like gold or diamond rings

 

You see I am a writer

so you better watch your back

I’ll write you into my next book

and give you lots of flack

 

I’ll feed you to a dragon

and then make you kiss a Lich

I’ll use you for target practice

and then make you Fizzle’s bitch

 

But I don’t take it personal

not in any way

negative reviews sell books

I wish you a good day

 

So thanks for offering your thoughts

and also for being frank

I will be thinking of your words

as I am in line at the bank

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author of the week:)

    My very first Author of the Week is the lovely Sarah Cradit. Sarah is smart as a whip, funny and has been one of my very favourite bloggers ever since I started this blog.

 

She is also an author and has written a series that you will not want to miss.  You can already find St. Charles at Dusk and will soon be able to get your hands on the second book in the series.

For more info on how to find Sarah’s books or if you just want to go say hello to her, click here:

http://sarahcradit.wordpress.com/an-introduction-to-the-house-of-crimson-and-clover-series/

Marketing With Harry Steinman: Part IIII

I am beginning to love Thursdays, how about all of you? Time for another round of do and don’t about Marketing with the very talented Gentleman Mr. Harry Steinman.

The feed back from this series has been great, but every author needs a bit of encouragement, so if you feel you have learned something here or are just enjoying listening to the story of another author, please let Harry and I know that you would like for us to continue:) Without further ado–Harry Steinman

 Pantser or Planner?

Twelve Tips to Self-Publish

By Harry Steinman,

Publisher With a List of Exactly One Book

Some authors are “pantsers”—free-form writers who write ad hoc, and then edit like crazy. Others are planners, methodical writers who follow outlines…and then edit like crazy. The best approach to writing is the one that works for you.

Publishing is another story. Only planners succeed. Publishing is right-brain territory. Pantsers succeed in self-publishing about as often as construction crews erect habitable skyscrapers without blueprints.

I studied self-publishing in workshops, read books and pestered experts with questions. Sometimes, I ignored the planning discipline, because I prefer fast to careful. This led to speed-induced bonehead decisions that were expensive to repair and humiliating to endure.

Lesson learned: planning and execution take time. Allow at least nine months—perhaps longer—to move your baby from final draft to first edition.

Here are a dozen tips so you can prepare to self-publish. See the last ‘graph of this post for more information about timelines and costs.
1. Decide on a selling strategy and stick to it. Print or eBooks? This single decision drives the entire process. I attempted both. EBook sales went well but print sales languished. IMHO, significant print sales require distribution through the traditional publishers.

2. Create a budget. Understand the process in advance and estimate the costs. Figure out how you’ll pay. I used Kickstarter to raise about half of the costs to self-publish. That will be the subject of a future post.

3. Should you just let a vendor do the work? There are dozens ready to handle all of the publishing and distribution tasks for you. Give ‘em a manuscript and, presto! Book. WARNING! If the vendor provides the ISBN, then the vendor owns your content. WARNING! Vendors will format your book, but many will not return your formatted manuscript if you choose to go elsewhere. Some will not let you go elsewhere.
Read the street-savvy guide, “Editors and Predators”. This labor of love exposes publishing, agent, and writing contest scams. http://pred-ed.com/

4. Shop for a cover designer. Don’t skimp here. A great cover plus a perfect blurb sell books. Weak covers produce tepid sales. You can get a cover, cheap, and it will show. I paid the price for a pro. It was the best decision I made. Look for a future post on covers and interior design.

5. Learn about book interior design and find a good designer. Good interior design is a plus for eBooks and a must for paper books. I consider the interior of Little Deadly Things to be exemplary. Check it out.

6. Amazon, Part I. Going to publish a paper edition? Create an Amazon strategy. Many print-on-demand (POD) houses act as a distributor for you for a small fee. If you use them and Amazon and other retailers will buy your book at a discount and then undercut your retail price. Amazon will always take first position in the buy box. Not sure what that means? Better learn everything you can about Amazon before you commit your resources.

7. If your strategy focuses on eBooks, then a POD that provides distribution may be a good idea. Smaller royalties for you, but no printing costs, no inventory carrying costs, and you can stick to promoting eBooks.

8. Amazon, Part II. Learn about the Kindle Select program. Great benefits, but you’ll give up some freedom with eBook sales in order to sign up. I’ll cover this in a future post.

9. Independent third-party reviewers require an advanced review copy (ARC) at least three months in advance of publication. Ignore this and you’ll empty your wallet to get an independent review—with no guarantee you’ll like the result.

10. If you publish a paper edition, choose cover and paper stock carefully. The tactile experience will enhance or diminish the reader’s pleasure.

11. Print your ARCs at least four months in advance of your production run. (Certain language is crucial on your ARC. You can find it on Dan Poynter’s website, listed below.)

12. Buy your own ISBNs. You will need an ISBN for each edition, print, eBook, library, etc. You can buy a single ISBN (bad deal) or 10 or 100 or 1000. There is only one vendor for ISBNs in the United States, Bowker. You’ll also need a bar code on a paper book.
This step is expensive but crucial. DO NOT LET A VENDOR OBTAIN YOUR ISBNs. (See Tip #3.)
I’ll share a bit more next week, enough to get you started. You have beacoup research ahead,well in advance of publishing. A good resource is Dan Poynter’s website and books. http://www.parapublishing.com/sites/para/about/danpoynter.cfm
Next week, I’ll cover an equally bewildering list of tasks, and, in future posts, discuss the importance of cover design, and interior design, of selecting vendors, and planning your launch.
***

Why bother with all this? Freedom. Creative control. Money. Satisfaction. Read the lengthy post, “Eisler & Konrath Vs. Hanchette” and you’ll be proud to say, “I self-published.” http://jakonrath.blogspot.com/2011/12/eisler-konrath-vs-hachette.html

Want more info on planning and costs? I’ll trade you my timeline and a breakdown of the costs I incurred for a review of Little Deadly Things on Amazon and Goodreads. I’ll send you an eBook copy, no charge, or a print copy if you cover the shipping cost (media mail is cheap). E-mail me at info@littledeadlythings.com for your copy.
Till next week!

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Sparkle and Fade: The lifelong question of the author (Tuesday Two cents)

I keep seeing various forms of the same question being asked on blogs, in forums and personally from authors. Please note, that I did not say INDIE author, I simply said author.

CHARLES

I really am picking on you, and all the other authors out there. Mostly you.

So, this question goes a little something like this:

 

 

 

 

 

 

“I have done everything I can to keep my sales going, but it

seems like they have just fallen off. I have settled into a

pattern of selling very few copies each day. I can’t figure out

where I am going wrong. Has anyone else had this

experience?”

I would like to dissect these statements and eventual question and offer my take on the situation. So here we go.

 

So you published a book right? Yep. Good on you! Hours of slaving away behind a computer compiling words in a strict order that are intended to wow audiences into disbelief of your awesomeness!

You have read everything you can find on the internet and in books about how to be successful at social media marketing, trends in the book industry, formatting, distribution etc.

You have written and rewritten and written one more (or a hundred more times) your blurb. You have chosen the best quote from your book or from a reviewer for your cover.

You have spent money, time and effort on your cover ensuring that it really relates your story in a visual way.

 

The first couple of weeks your sales are okay. Not the million plus books you dreamed about late at night when no one was looking and you were awake staring at the ceiling. Still, sales haven’t been bad.You have gotten a few reviews and they have been pretty good. You’ve possibly survived your first really bad 1 star review at this point and set aside the time for the appropriate meltdown. Was it good? I bet it was. Mine were too. I didn’t like that vase anyway.

 

You have been good about posting to your blog, word of mouth marketing, have passed the book to others aside from your immediate family and friend circle. You do regular social media updates and you do guest blogs, author interviews and take advantage of every other opportunity you can to spread the word about the goods you have to sell. You have finally gotten over the sting of having to give away something you worked hard on to increase sales. Look at that, you are almost all grown up.

Then the book has a burst of success!! You get up to your first goal number of books sold. Be it 100, 500, 1,000 or for you really big success hounds, 15,000. You made it onto the various lists on Amazon and while you were there more books started selling and you made it onto more lists. You are on top of the world. There is no way you are ever coming down from here. With your book being so successful in so many places you are guaranteed that someone from a movie studio or a major publishing house is going to spot you and drag you from the pit of misery you currently live in, watching your numbers go up and down, climbing and then falling off the lists, feeling joy and then heartache as your baby struggles first to stand and then to walk and then swiftly falls down on their bum and refuses to get back up and try again.

Hi. My name is reality. This is called being an author.

I don’t care of you are an indie author or a traditionally published author. You are an author and that means you have been cursed and blessed to this life. Enjoy it, appreciate it, live it to the fullest.

Do you really think that you are alone in this? Do you think that others, even the ones who are currently on the New York Times best sellers list are not going through the same thing. Woo! Guess what? When John Grisham falls off the NYT list and is replaced by some author no one had ever heard of before, his shame is public. Your shame of falling off the mover’s and shaker’s list on Amazon, more private, but still painful. Look at the parallel lines there peeps. You wrote a book. So did John. You both went Humpty-Dumpty and had a great fall.

If your book does not do well and you are with a small publisher or you have self pubbed, there are opportunities to correct the book, make it bigger, badder, better and try it again. Give it a new cover if that is part of the problem. Rewrite the blurb. Find new advertising sources.

If John’s book bites the big one guess what? There are a HELL of a lot more steps to correcting it. Chances are, the word about a poorly written book from a major author will travel faster than the speed of light, thus relegating the book to a deserted wasteland of missed opportunity. Your book, on the other hand, still trucking along even at a few sales a day, and no one is really saying anything bad about you. Go, read the bad reviews and negative comments about John’s book. It might make you feel better.

 

Here are some basic things that you must realise when you are staring at your numbers and trying to make sense of them.

 

1. Every single author whether published traditionally or not is going to have a different experience. Yes, there are some absolute no no’s and there are some good examples to be followed with hope of success. The only guarantee you get as an author is that you will work hard.

2. Luck has a hand in the entire outcome. Some people would argue with this. Let them. Ever heard one of those stories of someone happening to be in the right place at the right time and have something amazing happen? Me too. Not to say that you don’t have to work hard, but rather that sometimes an author gets lucky (not like that, honestly people focus.)

3. Genres are different and some sell better than others. Do you have more chance of selling books in the romance/erotica genre than in any other? Research would say yes. There are fads for each genre. Depending on what the current market trend is, you could do the exact same thing with your book two years in a row and get two completely different results. Sadly, a very poorly written book in one genre may outsell an excellent book in another genre.

4. Unless you are very strange, the call to be a writer was never about money in the first place. If you have given up all other forms of work to be a writer, you had better be dedicated, determined and have a thick skin. I am not saying you cannot support yourself with your writing, I am saying that until you have built enough of a following–until you have enough steady sales–you may have to do some piece work as well. Freelance writing can be tough, but it can also pay the bills when times are lean. You can also monetize your blog, should you have the desire to do so.

5. Being a lower ranking author is no different than being a top author from a major house when it comes to give and take. When a big name author puts their seal of approval on another author’s work, it may have actually been the publicist that arranged for those words to magically appear on that cover. When you don’t have a team of editors, publicists and so on behind you, then you do this work yourself. Either way you must learn to give and give often. Don’t make it all about you. Take a hint from the above mentioned author Charles Yallowitz

He is great at this particular aspect.

Share your blog with other authors who want to do guest posts. Read other author’s work and do the same thing you are asking of them. You didn’t get to where you are alone. You won’t go any further than you are alone either. Appreciate that others are going through the same thing.

6. Grow a pair. (Ladies this includes you too.) If you are going to make it in this world of hard selling your brand, name, book(s) to an audience of unadoring fans who have no idea who you are, find your inner self confidence. Doubt and negativity will only harm you.

If you were selling X number of books before and now you are only selling % number of books, this is called life. Do you really take the time to examine what this means? If you have 1 copy of your book in someone’s hands, you are reaching an audience you never would have reached if you had not published your book. 2 people is twice that many. Wow! What are you complaining about again? Two strangers who don’t know you from Adam are reading your work, possibly all the way across the world from you. How can this be a disappointment?

Ever heard of 6 degrees of separation? Really, go look it up. Yes, I really did plan for that to be part of #6. The rule in action.

7. Write your bum off. Seriously. Whether you write in multiple genres or the same genre, the most important thing if you intend to take the world by storm with your writing is that you keep putting out books. Everywhere you go, there you are. If you are dedicated to supporting yourself with your writing, then you must be disciplined and treat it like a full time job.

When you were working your past life job (pre writer) did you let the TV stop you from working? Did the other distractions stop you from doing your work. Not if you wanted a paycheck they didn’t. You know that nagging voice in your head telling you to get back to writing? Listen to it, that is your boss telling you to get back to work.

8. Take a break once in a while that does not include looking at your numbers, writing or doing anything with your own work. I love strawberries. They are quite possibly my favourite food of all time. If I ate them every day I would get sick of them. You will come to a point when your writing is shite and it reflects your mood. Get away from it for a while. Go outside, get vitamin D. Do something with your family, friends, whatever. Get away. Your audience will thank you when your characters do not suddenly commit suicide in the middle of your book.

9. When you are staring at those numbers you are not working.

 

10. Pick an author, any author. Now go do some research on them. How long did it take them to get their name out there and become famous? When did you publish your book again? A few months ago. Whew. You have really fallen behind. That other author only took ten years to get his book into print and five failed attempts before one took off, what are you waiting for?

 

So here are my final thoughts: If you want it bad enough you can do it. Some things are out of your control and always will be. Serenity prayer, unless you are an atheist. Then “Oh F*ck it” will work just as well. Look outside your bubble once in a while and see what the rest of the world is doing. Write, write, write. Edit and put out the best book you can. Have some self confidence. Learn as you go. Stop stressing and write. You didn’t sign up for this to increase your blood pressure and cholesterol. You signed up to increase your sales, your fame, your success.

 

And there is my Tuesday two cents.

Coin 23

 

 

 

Questions of Travel by Michelle de Kretser

Questions of TravelQuestions of Travel by Michelle de Kretser

A mesmerising literary novel, Questions of Travel charts two very different lives. Laura travels the world before returning to Sydney, where she works for a publisher of travel guides. Ravi dreams of being a tourist until he is driven from Sri Lanka by devastating events.

Around these two superbly drawn characters, a double narrative assembles an enthralling array of people, places and stories – from Theo, whose life plays out in the long shadow of the past, to Hana, an Ethiopian woman determined to reinvent herself in Australia.

Award-winning author Michelle de Kretser illuminates travel, work and modern dreams in this brilliant evocation of the way we live now. Wonderfully written, Questions of Travel is an extraordinary work of imagination – a transformative, very funny and intensely moving novel.–Goodreads

My rating: 3 of 5 stars

My thoughts:

I am really not sure what to think of this book. It has an interesting plot and it definitely has some beautiful prose, but the characters just fell flat for me. I didn’t love it, I didn’t hate it, I came up somewhere in the middle.

I liked the idea for this story, but honestly the idea was somewhat lost in miles of description and the slow pace of the novel. There are things happening in the book, but it takes the author a decent while to make sense of the situation and after a 100+ pages the book was still just meandering along.

This is a book that requires the reader to focus. The story is quite unique and intelligently written. The author has a pretty astonishing command of language, but I just can’t say this is my favourite book.

Sometimes the descriptions get so far off track that you can’t figure out what the original object the author describes actually is. Although there are some incredible passages in this book that are definitely worthy of being quoted, I found this novel rather lengthy for a book with such a slow moving pace.

Would I read another book by this author? Definitely. This one just wasn’t my personal taste.

This review is based on a digital ARC from the publisher and provided by Netgalley.

Five Star Unicorns of Happy Reviews (also known as my review of Legends of Windemere by Charles Yallowitz) Holy cow this is a really super very long title.

Luke Callindor was born into Windemere’s most decorated family of adventurers. Since his birth, he has been treated with the greatest amount of respect and awe. Now, with a lifetime of training and the reckless cockiness of youth, Luke has set out to prove that he deserves the admiration that comes from being a Callindor.

Luke gets his chance when he convinces a royal messenger to hire him to protect the heir of Duke Solomon. This future leader is secretly attending Hamilton Military Academy, an esteemed school run by the former mercenary, Selenia Hamilton. It is a dangerous secret mission requiring that Luke pretend to be an average student while keeping an eye out for any sign of danger. Unfortunately, Luke has no idea which student the heir is and a demonic assassin is already several steps ahead of him. Finding himself in over his head and constantly in trouble, the young warrior realizes that the only things he has on his side are some new friends and his unwavering courage.

Can Luke find and protect the heir while keeping his own head attached to his neck? And, can he avoid being suspended long enough to see his mission through to the end?–Goodreads

ebook & paperback, 353 pages
Published February 26th 2013 (first published March 13th 2006)
ISBN
1482585146 (ISBN13: 9781482585148)
edition language
English
My thoughts:
It has been a long time since I found an opener for a fantasy series that was better than some of the big names in this genre. Dare I say that Piers Anthony, Anne McCaffrey and David Eddings may have some competition in the works? I think so. Charles Yallowitz is one of the most talented new voices I have seen hit the fantasy market in recent memory.Charles Yallowitz clearly has the required imagination to write a top notch fantasy novel. He has an excellent grasp of the elements that all good high fantasy books should entail. His world is rich, descriptive and filled with dazzling sights that have not been visited time and again. He utilizes more than just the common senses that we typically see in characters, and that made this a pretty mind blowing experience.

There were some really original and unique aspects to this book. I thought the use of zombies in this novel was an out of bounds achievement. I wasn’t expecting to see popular genres of fantasy and horror cross that way, and the mindless killing machine mentality of the zombies in Windemere were somewhat reminiscent of “The Five Kingdom” Novels by Vivian French, another series of books that I adore that also crosses genres.

There is a lot of humour along the way, so even when things are serious for the characters and there is peril and danger, the author keeps you laughing and enjoying the comedy of the character’s situations. I appreciated this quality, as it has always been one of my favourite things about fantasy. The character’s also have the chance to be reflective, serious and compassionate, as I had hoped they would.

Luke is a well thought out character. He is trying to live up to the family name and meet the expectations of everyone around him, but in the process, is also trying to forge his own path and be who he is.

In the beginning, I was concerned that basing a character on expectation had been done before and may be a weak point for the story, but Charles Yallowitz made it his own. Luke makes friends, enemies and ultimately chooses to hone the gifts he already has for the betterment of his situation and that of those he cares for. This is my definition of a hero. Appropriately titled book–”Beginning of a Hero.”

One of the other things I liked about this story, was that you never quite knew what was going to happen next. The author did not waste miles of paper telling the reader every single thing that was about to happen, and managed to keep his narration to a minimum and let the reader discover the events as they occurred. Many fantasy author have a tendency to narrate their stories to death, but this author didn’t. I like it.

The book was written in third person and really fit in keeping with the RPG feel of the story. Since everything is progressive, the reader always feels as though they are moving through time at the same rate as the characters. This genuinely made me feel like the action was happening in front of my eyes. I think Charles Yallowitz may be ruining my love for the past tense. Perhaps I should deduct a star after all.

My favourite part of this book, hands down–was when Luke arrived at the training camp. He was self assured, cocky and a brat. All within a matter of hours, he learned that he should not be so certain of himself after all.

The way Mr. Yallowitz handled this was most impressive. Luke could have copped out and become a groveling fool, or he could have become even cockier and as a result, a less likable character. Instead, he accepted his faults, admitted his weaknesses and renewed his spirit by becoming even more determined to learn. This showed me two things: 1.) This is a character that can be both resilient and endearing. 2.)This character will not fail me in further novels. I can trust him to be reliable and intelligent.

The emerging friendship between Luke and Nimby is another strong point for this novel. Every great hero needs a sidekick of sorts, and that is the role that Nimby fills in this first book. What would Harry have been without Ron? What would have become of Frodo without Sam? Nimby is the glue that binds Luke to this tale.

I really don’t think there is anything I would have changed about this novel. I liked the dog (Stiletto). I liked the magic. I love the Lich. (Think epitome of evil.) I thought all of the supporting characters were well done. I am totally infatuated with Fizzle. I think I may even love him. I also enjoyed that each character has a personality of their own. You don’t have to worry about having “says so-ad-so” every sentence as the speaker is identifiable through the pattern of their speech. I think I may actually go into withdrawals until I get more Fizzle.

I do have to say, it has taken me a bit of time and effort to drop the R from windermere and get Windemere. I blame Oscar Wilde. Not the author’s fault, classic literature buff here.

I am really looking forward to the next book. If you love a good fantasy and have been missing the way things used to be, when heroes were truly heroic and didn’t back down from a challenge, pick up a copy and read it. You won’t be sorry you did.

Wild Song by Jane Eagland

Wild SongAn atmospheric historical romance for teens, from a gifted and acclaimed author. Beautifully packaged with a foiled jacket. Anna is living a lonely life on a small island with only her ageing mathematician father and his helper Max as company. When Rob washes ashore after an accident, Anna’s world is turned upside-down. Is Max really devoted to her father? Is Rob the love she’s been waiting for? Could she really leave the island? Drawing inspiration from The Tempest, Jane Eagland has woven a rich and moving story of mystery, love and deception.Particularly suitable for reluctant, struggling and dyslexic teens.

Wild Song by Jane Eagland

Paperback, 73 pages
Published July 1st 2012 by Barrington Stoke
ISBN
1781120447 (ISBN13: 9781781120446)
edition language
English

My rating: 3 of 5 stars

My Thoughts:

First of all, I would like to say that I do understand That this book is intended for dyslexic students/children at about a third grade reading level. I agree with that assessment. The material is easy reading, the language would be perfectly appropriate for the intended age group and the paragraph spacing and formatting is perfect for children that struggle with longer passages of text.

The story itself has a beautiful and somewhat haunting atmosphere. The young heroine finds herself in an impossible situation with an aging and ailing father who is extremely overprotective of her and wishes to keep her from life outside the island they inhabit. He guards her so closely that he refuses to even let her access books that describe life away from their home, although she gets them anyway.

The romance is sweet and does not come to much, so parents don’t have to worry about their child reading something that is too emotionally advanced for them. I liked the interaction between the main character and Rob.

While the writing was age appropriate and the over all story that was emerging was entertaining and piqued my interest, the ending was a somewhat disappointing. I did not feel that much of anything was resolved, and I felt that the book was setting up to be a series, but cannot find any indication that this is true. I don’t see anything anywhere that says “watch for book two coming soon” or anything else.

I found many parts of this book enjoyable, and think that kids age 10-14 would more than likely enjoy it, even with the end not resolving all of the issues raised in the story. My hope, is that there will be another book to follow soon.

This review is based on a digital ARC from the publisher, Stoke Books.

The satisfied loser, mums, free book and thanks

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First of all, I would like to say thank you to all the amazing mums out there inside the blogosphere and outside. You will never find a higher paying job ladies!

Happy Mother’s Day!

 

And now for the results of my marathon. Well, I made it across the finish line second, 3.8 seconds behind the leader. I was a bit disappointed in me for not getting first, but I crossed the finish line and in the end I suppose that is what is important.

So glad to not be training early this morning.  I will be taking part in another one at the beginning of Fall and am also planning a bike ride from Nevada to Oregon next spring.

 

I wanted to thank everyone for their support and well wishes during my training and participation in this event.  You all kept me going when I was so ready to give it all up! I am so lucky to have you all in my life:)

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If you have not caught it yet, Green Embers did a fabulous tribute to mums everywhere:

http://romeconstructioncrew.com/2013/05/12/happy-mothers-day/

If You would like to get a great free fantasy book you can share with mum this weekend, here is some info for you:

Roy Huff’s Fantasy ebook, Everville: The First Pillar  is free today through the 16th.  Here is the link: I read this book earlier this year and was impressed with it!

Everville: The First Pillar

 

 

 

 

Okay, so happy Mum’s Day everyone! Hope it is lovely for all of you. Tomorrow we will return to our regularly scheduled program of blogger of the week and books, books and more books. Also–a quick apology for not getting to your posts the last few days. I will work hard this week to get up so I don’t miss anything important. XOXO